Sarah is what I'm named.
I often feel ashamed.
Though it means I'm a princess,
it does not cope with my senses.
Millions and I have this name.
And its not that I don't like being the same,
I just like to be unique
like my sense of style, which happens to be chic.
Alena falls in the middle
although it may be little.
I, like my name, stand tall and strong (personi.)
since I've been hurt for so long.
Uh-lean-uh, as it is pronounced.
I'm not ashamed for this to be announced.
As the song "Lean on me when you're not strong,
and I'll be your friend. I'll help you carry on."
As Bill Withers would sing.
I'm only a phone call away, so give me a ring.
Last, but certainly not least.
My last name is the final piece. (Metaphor)
It has 10 unique letters
that wrap around you like warm sweaters. (Simile)
Leighliter is different
But yet I'm very content.
I felt like your poem was very deep like it came from you heart and you put a lot of Time and thought into this, great job sarah
ReplyDeleteVery nice job, way to go included the word chic. I like that word don't know why :o
ReplyDeleteI love the bill withers quote and the sweater simile is out of this world and you do stand tall and strong You go girl !! Lol
ReplyDeleteI like the rhymes you used and how you said your last name was the final piece.
ReplyDeleteI like your rhyming. "Though it means I'm a princess, it does not cope with my senses" GOOD JOB SARAAHH ! :p
ReplyDeleteSarah,
ReplyDeleteI like how you referenced a song and fit the rhyme scheme to match with the message. Well done!
Very good poem I liked how you described yourself in the poem and at the same time you were describring your name
ReplyDeleteI like your format the first stanza was for your first name the second was for your middle name and the third was for that it's different than the other poems I have seen good creativity.
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ReplyDeleteThat was an extremely great use of your rhymes. It was beautifully done
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ReplyDeleteI like how you used your whole name in the poem but you separated it to where it all flowed together, basically giving the whole meaning of your name in one short description. I also like how you used rhyming. I thought it was very good.
ReplyDeleteI can relate with your feeling about how millions of other people having your name because of how common my name is.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you listed all of your name since most just did their first or first and last name. Telling us what your name means and how you feel. On how you like your name but you want to be unique.
ReplyDeleteNice poem even though you didn't sound too satisfied with your name you still spoke about the positive effect it has to you
ReplyDeleteLove the poem Sarah. Your lucky to have the meaning princess mines is lame.
ReplyDeleteAlthough I thought it could be better I did like how you put the song into your poem it was a cool mix into the poem.
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